[A6] Now's your chance to make fun of my music!

jammer jammer at jammer.biz
Sat Feb 5 02:50:34 PST 2005


> Questions and detailed thoughts are especially welcome, be they
> positive or
> negative. Enjoy...hopefully :)

this track has some really nice elements but for me the arrangement isn't
there yet.  at 12 mins this is an epic, i'm not sure if the length is
something you particularly aimed for but this could make a killer 4-5 min
track.  consolidate all the ideas into smaller package.  condensing the
ideas can make for much more dramatic dynamics that can really get things
moving along.

also the lead that comes in at 09:39 really feel out of place, feels like
its fretting over the background a little, this could also be a mix issue
tho.

you could approach it by just taking the stronger elements and layering and
mixing them a little hotter, some light compression on the rhythm parts
could bring out some more of the drum textures and details too.  the decays
feel a little muffled in the mix at the moment.

over all, thumbs up on the sounds, thumbs down on the mix and the
arrangement.  epic tracks are not the easiest of nuts to crack.  good work
tho, has real potential!

jammer
www.jammer.biz




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